I look out my window and see the night sky
Under the same dark blanket is you and I
Your farther away then i wish you to be
But under these stars your here with me
I love you from the first dreamt touch to the last written word
I love you more with every thought thats occurred
One day you'll be with me, till the end of days
Until i can't breath anymore, i'll never go away
To be Continued...
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Lovely write!
Great job on this piece, I love the simplicity here! Great emotion and imagery.
Bravo!!!
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Beautiful Sentiments...
Thank you for your poignant entry in this Internet Connection contest!! After reading and re-reading the poem, I didn't see anything indicating an Internet connection though. Did I miss something?!!? I think your tenderly written love story is beautiful just the same. Wishing you all the best, and thanks again!! 
Peace, xx Cyn 
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Nice piece!
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I can't quite reading this poem, it's great.
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nice write i saw you viewed one of my explicit pieces and didnt leve me a comment but i will leave you one the write was a great loving affection write and it didnt bore me so it had action to it. Hugs
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Wow, this girl has to be the luckiest person alive. You are just too sweet. A true gift. Absolutely lovely.
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I'm glad you liked it, That girl makes me feel good enough to write like this
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