True love never dies,
it's a bond of no goodbyes.
Where at times forgiveness leads,
a give and take of thoughtful deeds.
Love's a treasure kept inside,
through thick and thin it does abide.
Brings a friendship dear to heart,
strong enough to never part.
A love that stays within the heart,
loving kindness from the start.
Not to give up, it keeps on strong,
concerns if anything does go wrong.
Working together to keep it true,
it doesn't matter what you do.
Unconditionally a love that lasts,
no matter what happens present or past.
It's not about lust or desires need,
deep inside the heart would bleed.
It is a love that never lets go,
an honest relationship with the one you know.
A contest entry
- Romance of the Heart by Liquid memories.
525 points, ended November 26, 2007, 32 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Happy 13 by daviscth.
800 points, ended October 26, 25 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is such a beautiful love poem and I love that it is loaded with good advice. You've really created a great poem. Thanks for sharing it in my contest.
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Very Nicely Put
I love good rhyme..rhyme that flows as does teh blood in our veins, without troubles or pains. And you have done a good job with this work..and carried with it a beautiful message also. Nicely done,
Evan
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tis a wonder to have and share true love. nicely done. success in the contest.
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