I hate you,
The words flew into me,
Like a thousand daggers,
Ripping my soul to shreds,
Her eyes of pure hate,
Killed me,
Filled me with a loss,
Never felt before,
Then in this perfect blend,
Of loss,
Love,
Anger,
I snapped,
Yelling words,
And phrases,
In strange tongues,
Grabbing her soft shirt,
I seize a knife,
Weilding it like a butcher,
Slicing her skin,
Blood,
Entrails,
Tossing them about the room,
Her gasping screams died,
Covered in blood I felt nothing,
Only the calm releif knowing,
I destroyed the one who betrayed me.
Author notes
20. It is double the pleasure to decieve the deciever. - Niccolo Machiavelli
I don't usually write about this kind of thing anymore but it felt right to write.
A contest entry
- Give Me Dark With These Quotes by xxRainbowDawnxx.
325 points, ended June 11, 2007, 9 entries
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Comments
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Wow... Neato!
Awww I love that you threw a little gore in there. good job dood.
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I know how you mean sometimes I just feel compelled to write about a particular topic or feeling. I enjoyed this though as it was brutal and honest and you can almost feel anger and the tears at the same time. x
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Holy Mother of Pearl Jam!!
Wow!! What a piece You have penned my son
Oy!! Hair raising images~
Powerful verse
Powerful quote too
Thank You for sharing this!
Many blessings to You in the contest
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Powerful
Wow darling. I like this, It is violent but like I said powerful.
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