Cold blood runs through this Ice-Bitches veins
Killer behind memories invade like dripping stains
Knife pain slicing through my throbbing, spinning head
Dagger visions making me wish I were already dead
Myths of mercy blasted as the blood-river start it's flows
Pounding screams inside the head thinking 'My God, no one knows'
Tears run uselessly, gives her reason to grin in glee
Shock jock having nothing on what this woman's doing to me
Pills for thrills, medication dulls jutted impressions
Longing for some of the mind-numbing drugs for depression
Hate broken over the ruination of my heart
Lost little child, red in blond as death does start
Crimson hand-prints on the walls, my last testament
Splatters and spatters of hemoglobin all across the vestment
Sniffing sulfur scented smoke; devil in her lair
Drugs, booze, pain and unheeded warnings to beware
Selfish careless attitude led me to my demise
Ripped egocentricity bringing hurt surprise
Thoughts of regret as I slowly and painfully die
Vein throbbing leaking life; in vain for mercy cry
Sword of rescuer, Mighty knight upon steed
Not going to happen, and I will not be freed
Moon turning ruby as my blood-welded eyes lose sight
Scarlett dark this seductress that will take my life tonight
Empty bladder voided, my weary mind gives way
Spiting red-tinged spittle in her face; life fading away
Author notes
inspired by the picture:
http://www.policensw.com/info/forensic/images/hand.jpg
and the wordbank (which I have done IN ORDER and used all of them):
Cold, Blood, Ice, Bitch, Killer, Behind, Memories, Knife, Dagger, Myths, Blasting/blast, Pounding/pound, tears, shock, pills, medication, depression, Hate, Broken, Heart, Lost, Red, Crimson, Splatter, Spatter,
Sniff, Smoke, Drugs, Booze, Pain, Ripped, Hurt,
Thoughts, Die, Vein, Vain, Sword, Mighty, Not, Moon, Ruby, Scarlett, Empty, Weary
In a list
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Comments
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very nice. thanks soo much for entering. sorry i havnt commented sooner.. anyways- its great and i love it and thanks for entering!!!
Claire-Anne -
wow this was really good imjust in awe
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What an awesome write. Very dark indeed. Excellent use of the word bank and a truly great interpretation of the pic. Your imagery is so real. Best of luck in this contest 
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