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Where did it go?

I went to see the horizon today
When I got there it had moved away
So I continued on to where it had gone
Only to find it had again withdrawn

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the answer to the riddle is the horizon.

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  • intanglio2ring
    June 11, 2007
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    Congrats!

    A very fine answer to the riddle!
    Tang


    • Pollycheck
      June 12, 2007
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      intanglio2ring

      Thanks for the congrats and the applauses. they are appreciated greatly.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 11, 2007

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    This was just cute and catchy. And it stood out. It almost added on to what I had written. Nicely done and congrats on the win.

    Thanks for entering
    Storm


    • Pollycheck
      June 11, 2007
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      StormGoddess

      Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and the gold. I am honored.


  • azure85 gold member
    June 10, 2007

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    Oh, this is so good!  I love your poem, and the idea of following the horizon and it never ends!

     

    far horizon

     

    LJ sitting at his desk

     

    one more week 'til summer

    • Pollycheck
      June 10, 2007
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      Susie

      Thank you for you kind comments. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Do you think LJ will make it till summer vacation?

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