[I] have turned into a twisted slue of nothingness just waiting here to die
[L]eft here to rot in an empty black hole
[O]f no value, I've become
[V]iolence is what I live for
[E]verything has turned into nothing
[Y]ou have been an angel to me,
[O]pen cuts that bleed and bleed
[U]nfairness is what I live and live for
[D]arkness is no longer troublesome
[E]verything I've lived for is nothing
[A]fter I fell in love, all I am is
[R]age
[E]agerly awaiting,
[V]isualizing your face
[E]mpty inside
[N]othing but lies and
[T]orture
[H]ave some decency
[O]ver and over again, I picture our last kiss,
[U]nity between us,
[G]ave me thoughts
[H]aving those kisses is what's keeping me here
[I]nsanely in love,
[T]his isn't what I planned,
[S]haring a life with you, sharing a death
[K]nowing what I've become,
[I]'ll never go back
[L]osing you would bring too much bliss,
[L]oving you brings such beautiful pain
[I]t makes me feel so good
[N]ever will I breathe a breath of relief
[G]iving so much good and getting so much bad,
[M]akes me give more
[E]very ounce of blood goes to you my love
Copyright {c} 2007 Hannah Duffin {All Rights Reserved}
Author notes
Sorry, but I'm not going to be used by you any more.
A contest entry
- ♥ Lovely Used ♥ by Ignis Corpus.
365 points, ended June 24, 2007, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Wow
I mean, I could conjure up an acrostic for "DOGGY" or "I'M WITH STUPID," but this is quite an undertaking. I sense that someone doesn't deserve the love you have to offer, but you seem to have plenty to spare. ;-)
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Don't be makin apologies chica! Good for you! Fantastic, expressive, emotioanl and very (girl)powerful acrostic!! Best of luck!!!
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thats wonderful, i like it, and it fits the rules lol good job and goob luck
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it works, good job, but it is less than 20 lines and you didnt put in the authors box, so i am going to give you until tomorrow to fix those mistakes. if not then i will DQ you.
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