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horizon



you can pass me

but by the time you do

I will have recreated myself

far off in the distance











Author notes

Because the riddle said "where those orbs will rest", it must be a location...I was thinking twilight, but that is not a location. So I decided it must be horizon.

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  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    June 11, 2007

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    Interesting deduction, nice writing. Cool answer, as it is very true too. Good work.

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