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Writing upon my veins.

I wonder what I am getting into,
As I gently do the writing,
I find myself in another time and place,
Slowly I dream as I shut my eyes.

Writing with my eyes so shut,
No longer alive, simply breathing,
My heart does a flip as I begin to breathe once more,
Feeling lightly I begin to emerge.

I see on the screen - poetry so swiftly wrote,
Before I knew it I was done in a flash,
But what will everyone else think? I begin to ponder anew,
But before I know it, another begins to form.

More poetry is written and on the screen,
I do not know where it all comes from,
But from my mind or heart or soul.

I figure one way or another,
Poetry is in my veins.

I breathe once more and look upon the screen,
Remembering little upon none,
My heart beginning to flutter,
Remembering little upon none.

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  • strangerforeigner
    February 4, 2008

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    Excellent! Very good description of your writing experience! Exactly what I was looking for! Thanks and good luck in my contest!


  • DeadLetter
    June 10, 2007
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    No problem xD

  • DeadLetter
    June 10, 2007

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    I love this poem xD
    It reminds me of me...though sometimes I have to think long and hard over just one word...Well done anyway!

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