Of cosmos, yet ostracized, to naked human vision
All around, and around everything, yet unattainable
An existent Illusion, more powerful than any other
How far or what dimensions? Cannot be measured.
The enigmatic beauty keeps me at her horizon
From where she cannot see me, and yet not miss me.
Author notes
Here is philosophical description of horizon as a metaphore to beauty which is enigmatic.
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Comments
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Amazing write. You wrote so descriptively and enticingly. I love it and I love the meaning behind it. You capture the essence of the horizon and the beauty of which you speak of is radiant. fabulous.
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So true that she, Mother nature, displays such an enigmatic beauty against her horizon line. Nice work.
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