You say you love me
You say you hate me
do you know me anymore
do you know yourself
in your supressed mind
where do i stand
no longer do i know
am i high or low
you tell me you hate me
i cry
you tell me you love me
... i cry
logic you have murderd
and with it you buried my heart
A contest entry
- Make Me Feel... by KittieLyyn.
360 points, ended June 24, 2007, 39 entries
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Comments
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very cool. very interesting.
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wow
your others poems were great but this one is definately the best. the flow and emotion are perfect and i love that i can really relate to your writing. keep writing..you're great
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