Trees,
waving in the breeze.
Waving their branches
in the high sky.
A Branch falls.
It grows back.
With new little leaves.
Trees will be with you all
your life.
With all your might you
should save trees.
They Clean the air,
give you shade,
give you a climbing place,
a hideout.
Pretty much any thing.
Appreciate Trees.
In a list
A contest entry
- Contest for KIDS ... Write about trees. Prewrites invited... by Melodies.
600 points, ended June 2, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think. And this for my friend wildpikachu
Comments
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YES! YAY for trees! I like the playful tone of this poem, plus the serious message, combined.
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I love this poem because it reminds me about the beautiful circle of life but also reminds me of all the fun things about trees...and the things we should really appreciate. I hope lots of people read this poem and get the message Lots of luck in the contest and always!
Ellie
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I really liked these lines:
"A Branch falls.
It grows back.
With new little leaves."
I wish you would have expanded more on this. it's an interesting concept. but this is a spectacular write nonetheless. good luck with it in the contest. -
So Cooleo and is loved so mush by me
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I knew you would love it! :)
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