The horizon line so far away
will mark the dawn and break of day
The artist’s eye will set me first
as perspective shows all things disperse
Author notes
My Answer is the HORIZON LINE!
Not the sunset!
A contest entry
- Riddle Me Another One by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended June 11, 2007, 12 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very good
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Very well deserved trophy., in fact I would have awarded gold
purely because it rhymes so smoothly.
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Being an artist (I paint and sketch) this stood out to me very nicely. Much inspiration to be found in the lines of the horizon, especially sitting at the beach. Love the piece Tang.
Thank you for entering
Storm
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Bravo! Great piece.Good guess and a good poem to match.
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I just wrote one very much similar to this. lol I guess brilliant minds think alike. With that same answer even. LOL
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very good job tang
I could just see you sitting in the yard watching the sunset till the corn gets to high to see over it.
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Thank you!
Yep!
I like watching our sunset out the kitchen window!
You did get that my answer to the riddle of the contest was the Horizon Line.
Thanks for your vision & comment!
Tang
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If this is a riddle, I guess the answer is sunset. I like the rhyming in it and it is a catchy one. It sounds pretty when you read it aloud.
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