You look into the horizon..
What do you see?
Nothing but the empty sea
Sitting by yourself,
on the edge of a cliff
How lovely the breeze must be
So lost in thoughts,
lost in the illustrated beauty before you
No words can ever describe
god's art at ease in heart
So cold, yet so warm
So bloody, yet so hypnotic
So loud, yet so peaceful
Listening to a sea's voice
nothing as relaxing as the
colliding waves
Could man ever create,
such perfectionist portrait?
A contest entry
- ~ Peace~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended June 14, 2007, 17 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hi my lovely Marina
I haven’t read your works for so long. I’m glad to have the chance of reading them again and yes, this poem was so nicely written. I enjoyed the beautiful imagination behind it. Aye to your talent and thank you for sharing this with us
~Massy~
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give him a cliff, some breeze, a sea and see what happens..
lol jk nevermind
i love it!
you know...it's summer...holiday...you reminded me of the weeks at the seaside!! *day dreams*
waaaa i soooo miss going there...
okay i'll read this poem anytime i miss the seaside ^^
*starts readin again&again&again*
i so felt i was there as i was reading the poem!!
873648725235312795 dozens of applauds ^^
great piece! i wish you good luck in the contest!! beat'em all!!! the first place has your name on it! haha xD
- van*yo*lla ~ic~
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Wonderful imagery, and an all around very relaxing read. Nice job.
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No!!! I don't think man could ever make something as beautiful as the sea!!! Keep up the good work and I hope you visit my page!!! jess
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SOme great imagery here! This was soothing to read! Thanks for sharing and best wishes in the contest!
Frogz~ -
Thank you for sharing in our contest,
Peace has so many meanings,
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz
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