A world of beauty meets the sky.
A vista reaching wide.
This boundary goes on and on,
yet still fails to divide.
For as we're getting closer,
to fulfilling all our dreams,
the horizon moves yet further.
Ever stretching us, it seems.
Perhaps it is God's wisdom.
A plan to make us strive,
to reach our full potential,
and to bring our dreams alive.
Author notes
Sometimes, all we need to do, is just look beyond our horizon.
photo 'Sunset Stroll' by Simon http://www.beakerst.shutterchance.com/photoblog/Sunset_Stroll/
A contest entry
- Riddle Me Another One by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended June 11, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I absolutely loved this, and you got the answer correct. But unfortunately, it was to between 2 and 5 lines only. I could not award in this as it would not have been fair to other entrants.
Thank you for entering
Storm -
Wow! This poem was fantastic (well, aren't all your poems fantastic?)! The rhyme was ah-mazing (again, as I cannot rhyme myself). The words were perfectly chosen and had a lot of meaning behind them. Oh, plus I <3-ed the picture you used.
Beautiful poem.
And awesome job, once again.
-S
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