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Waters Revenge

Walking through a park am I

And trees are green and in line

In the distance there is water

And brightness that does shine

I see swimming in the water

A lost creature, a lonely soul

And someone is watching

Who has secrets to hold

 

And now I turn to the right

And a city by the sea

The cars are moving slowly

And the numbers count to three

The sun is behind the mountain

And the weather's turning fast

The dark skies fill the evening sky

And this shall come to pass

 

Its winter time on an island plane

And upside down we be

I shall give the islands name

And tell you what I see

New Zealand where I am now

The darkness comes upon her

No light shall her dark allow

As the goddess begone her

 

Beetle cars roam village streets

Tis quiet evening now

Soon to be disrupted great

By natures devastating flow

And water rises from the deep

Devouring park and people

Goodbye small villages in New Zealand

Goodbye car that is beetle

 

Vanishing vision fades out now

A warning it is given

Evacuate the island now

Or watch them go to heaven

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  • FallenAngel09
    June 13, 2007

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