Standing in the garden bathed in the warmth of July,
music floating on the wind like a lullaby.
My lips do part and from them comes a sigh,
as I look up into the sky,
and watch the gentle clouds float by.
Author notes
I wasn't sure if this was exactly what was meant by make it poetic but hey. The title is the sky, but just in case, I'm pretty sure the answer to the riddle is the sky.
A contest entry
- Riddle Me Another One by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended June 11, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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I love what you've written. The rhyme is nice and paints a spendid picture. Unfortunately it was the incorrect answer.
Thank you for entering
Storm -
wow. this is indeed very poetic. atleast i think so. and the rhyming is very good. love it!
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