Day rolls in
as night rolls out
sun in its din
preparing to rise.
A new day is DAWNING.
Author notes
my answer is dawn. It is between sunrise and sunset
A contest entry
- Riddle Me Another One by StormGoddess.
300 points, ended June 11, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Short, but, a lovely description of night turning to day. I liked this a lot.
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Although it's not quite the correct answer, you did good with this. Dawn would fit with most of the riddle. Nice work.
Thank you for entering
Storm -
beautiful and poetic. I think you painted a wonderful picture with your words!
I hope your answer is right, and good luck!
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