I met you online
you say you love me
I have fallin for you
I hope I can trust you not to hurt me
my parents would flip if they knew
that I was dating an online guy
like you
but there isnt another guy like you
I met you online last night
but I already love you and
I hope you love me too.
I gave you my love,
and my trust in you is great
so don't hurt me
and lose my trust.
Author notes
option 8
*LOVE is giving someone the ABILITY to hurt you... but TRUSTING them not to..!!!
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This is all so true, babi. Ah...one of my favorite quotes. This is a great poem and it made so much sense. It really applied to the quote. Well written. Good luck!!!
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excellent
i love it. so much pain, and fear, yet also hopeful. great job, and keep writing! -
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thank you.
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well i know what kinda of situation you are in trust me i was in it yesterday... and it wasnt to good.. but it got better in the end if it was ment to be then it will work out hope it does good job and good luck in the contest
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thank you and i hope so too
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