Her search for beauty, poise and passion,
The want and need for latest fashion.
Men that lust her curves and motion,
Seems like a ship that's on the ocean.
The way she walks is like the waves that’s in the sea,
Boat and body flows so light, so elegant and free.
Moving with the water, one harmony, one love,
Her unity with beauty; God's creation from above.
Commanding power has the ship, with spender and with grace,
Is like the power that she has just by her pretty face.
This power that men cannot withstand,
The lust destroys them with one touch of her hand.
"Who conquers the sea conquers the world,"
An old saying by commanders of past,
But a saying with time and new technology really didn't last.
For as the ship is losing all its majesty and power,
So too in time, will her beauty, be lost in her final hour.
Author notes
picture inspired write, for a contest, link to pic:
http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i150/pollycheck/weird/Slide13.jpg
A contest entry
- Weird Art by Pollycheck.
450 points, ended June 25, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is a very interesting take on this image. I like the way you interpreted it. The meter seems a little off in places and in a couple of places the rhyme seems a little forced, but overall a very nice poem.
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Thank you for your interest in this contest. I hope that you have fun using the following link for your inspiration. Please make sure to either include the picture or include a link to the picture. Good luck and remember above all, have fun and enjoy yourself. Your link is: http://i71.photobucket.com/albums/i150/pollycheck/weird/Slide13.jpg
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