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Patriot

iPod allegiance
to the checkered flag,
apocalypse spy cam
Jamiroquai,

who sold the incumbent
to Richard sans, for
one statement, a
Valium nod;

dreams invisible
with quinine and
lunch breaks for all.

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  • Lute
    July 5, 2007
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    amen.

    Percoset, and alcohol
    here's the way it sits
    for one and all


  • Cat gold member
    June 25, 2007
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    congrats!


  • XxobsessedwithyouxX
    June 24, 2007
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    really goo

  • aboutface
    June 11, 2007
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    Music is 75% of my existence. I didn't realize I had made so many references to music until you mentioned it....Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for stopping by.


  • polly filla
    June 11, 2007

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    this made me laugh, then sharply stop laughing! A precise style that throws the content out for much thought.

    music's meant to incite, yet the constant stream of s...t desensitizes? negative energy indeed

    thanks for the read!


  • cvillelisa
    June 10, 2007

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    I always thought Jamiroquai was pretty funky -- and Maroon 5 a sort of wannabe Jaimroquai. I remember a video and the lead singer dancing kinda whacky cool.

    You should check out mattimc (another poet here) he doesn't post often but when he does it is always for me popping fresh. Like this. Thanks for plome.

    Lisa

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