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die die

evil takes many forms
it gets ahold of your soul
and your pretty little heart transforms
your words become poison
amd your skin starts to crawl
your muscles all tense
and you get ready to brawl
the angel on your shoulder
falls to your feet
and your anger begins to smolder
and this you asshole
is what you put me through
and so now my friend
i will kill you
see it won't be quick
no you won't see the light
the last thing you'll see
is my smiling face
the last sick site
you'll see before hell
first you'll swallow a toothpick
maybe stuck
in your expensive little sandwich
then it'll get lodged
deep in your intestine
and there it'll fester
and splinter and stab
and when it gets infected
you'll start to rot from the inside out
til one day
you'll walk down the side walk
and your legs will give way
your head will hit
the cold hard pavement
you'll here a roar
and look up to the sun
but no more light for you
instead the grill
of a big black truck
ill drive it with a smile
and the last thing you'll see
before your head pops
will be smiling face
willing your death
my eyes bidding you
a last farewell
and then you will die
and i will finally live
it will be our final goodbye
dad


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  • MOvIng iN StERiO
    June 11, 2007
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    fuck john hunny. i love you. this is a good write. i would polish out the edges a bit.


  • zhaniswolf
    June 11, 2007

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    i could definitely tell by reading this poem what option it was. the very last word... wow. wow. wow.

    i don't really know what to say about this other than you certainly have this planned out... dang.

    great write.