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Unkept Promises, Unseen Tears.

It's all about finding the right person,
You just don't know that you're the right person
So you mess with my heart,
And tell me to stop what you caused.
You made me make promises that I know won't be kept,
You haunted me at night in dreams while i slept,
I told you I loved you
&& your making me wait.
You don't understand that I'm falling to pieces,
That I can't wait forever...
So I'm waiting,
I'm making promises I can't keep,
I'm falling to pieces,
Because I'm in love,
Nobody knows but you.
Your sitting next to me and I'm crying,
Because I know that I'm lying,
When I promise you I won't do it again.
Unkept Promises,
Unseen Tears.

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  • BeautifulDisaster9
    October 20, 2007
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    Fucking amazing.

    I love it.

    BOOKMARK.


  • glamour guts
    June 16, 2007
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    really good

    I really like this poem,really conacts with how alot of people feel about love.


  • dionne.
    June 13, 2007

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    omg bue-t-fol

    &&i'm snapping my fingers,
    if i clap it will give me a headache.
    serious hangovers.


  • smntha.
    June 13, 2007

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    Wow. Such a beautiful and inspiring piece all at the same time. It's very true and so sad. Babi, I know how it all goes. The title fit this poem so perfectly. Good luck!!!