It's all about finding the right person,
You just don't know that you're the right person
So you mess with my heart,
And tell me to stop what you caused.
You made me make promises that I know won't be kept,
You haunted me at night in dreams while i slept,
I told you I loved you
&& your making me wait.
You don't understand that I'm falling to pieces,
That I can't wait forever...
So I'm waiting,
I'm making promises I can't keep,
I'm falling to pieces,
Because I'm in love,
Nobody knows but you.
Your sitting next to me and I'm crying,
Because I know that I'm lying,
When I promise you I won't do it again.
Unkept Promises,
Unseen Tears.
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A contest entry
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Fucking amazing.
I love it.
BOOKMARK.

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really good
I really like this poem,really conacts with how alot of people feel about love. -
omg bue-t-fol
&&i'm snapping my fingers,
if i clap it will give me a headache.
serious hangovers.

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Wow. Such a beautiful and inspiring piece all at the same time. It's very true and so sad. Babi, I know how it all goes. The title fit this poem so perfectly. Good luck!!!




