One day we will be together again
I don’t know how, I don’t know when.
But, there is one thing that I know for sure,
my love for you will never end.
Bring back the magic that we once shared,
tell me that you love me and that you still care.
Let me hold you in my arms until the end of time,
darling I will be yours and you will be mine.
I’ll always love you and I hope that you realize,
all that I feel for you is genuine and written in the skies.
You’ll always be with me wherever I am,
deep in your heart I hope that you understand.
Even though it’s been a while,
I still can feel you here in my arms,
This feeling of security and reassurance,
sadly, it never gets me very far.
My heart longs to be with you,
my soul cries out your name.
If only you could somehow see,
all of the emotions that still remain.
Please tell me that you are coming home,
let’s put an end to this childish game.
Hold my hand and never let it go,
please tell me that you feel the same.
Open your heart and let me in,
tell me those words that I long to hear.
Open your eyes and see who I am,
I know that together, it will all come clear.
One day we will be together again,
I don’t know how, I don’t know when.
But, there is one thing that I know for sure,
my love for you will never end.
Bring back the magic that we once shared,
tell me that you love me and that you still care.
Let me hold you in my arms until the end of time,
darling I will be yours and you will be mine.
I’ll always love you and I hope that you realize,
all that I feel for you is genuine and written in the skies.
You’ll always be with me wherever I am,
deep in your heart I hope that you understand.
Look into my eyes and you will see,
hold my heart in your hands and believe in me.
I’ll do anything that you ask and all that you desire,
as long as you are here with me.
Let’s sit back together and reminisce the times,
when our love was all that we knew.
Can you remember the first time we said “I love you”?
Oh what it did to me, what it did to you.
I will never forget that day,
and the way you made me feel.
I will never forget that warm afternoon,
that pledge we made was so innocent and real.
To have and to hold you,
to feel your heart beating together with mine.
To hear you whisper those words again,
would be so wonderful and divine.
I wait for the day when we reunite,
I dream of you every day and night.
I hope that you are safe wherever you maybe,
and that someday soon, you will come home to me.
One day we will be together again,
I don’t know how, I don’t know when.
But, there is one thing that I know for sure,
my love for you will never end.
Bring back the magic that we once shared,
tell me that you love me and that you still care.
Let me hold you in my arms until the end of time,
darling I will be yours and you will be mine.
I’ll always love you and I hope that you realize,
all that I feel for you is genuine and written in the skies.
You’ll always be with me wherever I am,
deep in your heart I hope that you understand.
One day we will be together again,
someday soon I will hold you once more.
And when we are together again,
I will love you forevermore.
Author notes
This is a Song that I wrote.
- Honesty is Gold Dust group list • next in list
A contest entry
- Music = Life. by Beautifuly.Wasted.
566 points, ended August 7, 2007, 15 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Lyricist Needed by walkingstick98.
500 points, ended September 22, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Friends, I appreciate your comments and review on this write. However, please do not add my name to your comments due to the contest rules. Thank you very much!
Comments
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Very nicely done.. Good flow and good message. I enjoyed this very very much. You have a beautiful pen and style. Thank so much for entering
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AMAZING!!!
so sweeeeeet...wonderful i couldnt stop reading! well said my friend ...touching wordsss
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WOW!!!!
Now this is what I call beautiful! I couldn't keep my eyes off of it. You have a way with words that keeps me tranced. Amazingly stunning and gorgeous. This is what every woman wants to hear and whomever this was inspired by, is one lucky woman! -
BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Loved reading this! amazing song lyrics!! -
This had such an amazing flow to it. I could definitely imagine it being put to music. You have done such a great job with this song.
Thank you so much for entering and good luck in the contest.
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Sweet Nectar of the gods. This flowed so well. Usually rhyme is forced and makes writes terrible, but you did so well with it throughout this whole piece.
I have one favor to ask
Could you put which lyrics you chose from in the AN? -
this is really sweet the way i feel abt my ex!
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OMG this is so cute!! So beautiful, the person you wrote it for should appreciate this beautiful piece of art! I love it! I wonder if someone would write something like this for me
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Excellent
First off.... let me congratulate you on your Gold Trophy win.
Well deserved.
Secondly, these lyrics are wonderfully penned.
Well done.
Keep up with the great work.
Keep on penning.
Thank you so very much for sharing.
*S* Cynthia
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This is very beautiful - love it. I was just browsing users, and you caught my eye. I'm glad you did because this poem is so nice. It's very relatable for a lot of people I think...very well written. Everything about it is GRAND!!
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Serenade of Simplicity
Can you remember the first time we said “I love you”?
Oh what it did to me, what it did to you.
My favourite lines of all!!! Ugh, I love this so much!!!
HUGS, Dari xxx
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it's pretty and very genuine. I think it's a tad long for me and my taste but all the same it's packed with good emotions. the rhyme scheme could stand to be a little more organized at the beginning though. Thanks for the entry!
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wow this was really nice... a bit long though
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Beautifull!!
This is a very romantic poem which can make up a beautiful
song
I simply loved it, and in fact I have a piece similar to this one
except it is a bit shorter; I haven't posted it on my allpoetry yet.
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By the way thanks for your comment, it's always nice to
get a feedback!
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You'll go far with your sweet imagination!!
WAY TO GO!!
Cheers,
Fernanda
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This lyrics went straight to my heart. It is like a bomb This is so beautiful.
I can totally relate to it.
Honestly,Your words truely touched my heart when I read it. It express a lot of feelings. " I Am Lovin It" ) keep it real. It rocks...I smile
Grace
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wow, this is a beautiful song that you wrote. its awesome. so much emotion and very strong too. I can relate to this so very much. great job. good luck in the contest.
kathy
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Oh my…a very hopeful song to remind discouraged lovers out there that indeed ‘true love waits…’ thank you for sharing a very positive and lovely song…
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Good
I thought I would let you know that your meter starts differently than it ends. I'm a sucker for form and meter. I would hate to see a potentially good poem go bad because of a silly mistake. You don't have to fix it, but I wanted you to know. -
this is a very romantic song! No wonder you won that beautiful gold trophy
GBY
SilverButterfly
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I will never forget that day,
and the way you made me feel.
I will never forget that warm afternoon,
that pledge we made was so innocent and real.
To have and to hold you,
to feel your heart beating together with mine.
To hear you whisper those words again,
would be so wonderful and divine.
I wait for the day when we reunite,
I dream of you every day and night.
I hope that you are safe wherever you maybe,
and that someday soon, you will come home to me.
One day we will be together again,
I don’t know how, I don’t know when.
But, there is one thing that I know for sure,
my love for you will never end.
How these lines how touched my heart, maybe you will never know, but when the love is in your heart, then for sure it shall never depart. People speak, and how they say, the love they had was given away, that somewhere deep it lost its meaning, but then i must ask, for whom it was given? Foolishly people seem to question, can it be true, real, or just an impression, but when love is for the good of sake, then there is no doubt, it couldnt be a mistake, what you have written to me, most defiently is not fake, you have touched my heart in so many ways!! Thank you for entering, and best of luck to you as well!!
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One day we will be together again
I don’t know how, I don’t know when.
But, there is one thing that I know for sure,
my love for you will never bend.
There is just something in the end- where you used bend instead of end.......... why this word very instresting it brings a question to mind maybe a retorical one. Love it
I qoute you now
One day we will be together again,
someday soon I will hold you once more.
And when we are together again,
I will love you forevermore.
I hope this is true for you. I hope you two will end up together soon. Its almost like my poems Hundreds of Miles stole my love. I feel the way you feel, missing your partner shows her for real.
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Good..
My god… such a long poem.. amazing.. A wonderful tribute to love n guess that kept u moving on.. with so many verses of beautiful music.. It’s a melody! Congratz on the trophy!!
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I think that this flowed very well as a song, because it was really well rhymed, had good meaning to it, good wording, too, and I was imagining it on the radio or in my CD player when I was reading it (and that's a really good thing).
I think that you did really well with the flow and I think that this would easily fit into the country, soft rock, pop and even ballad genres.
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This very good and I think this is a wonderful song.This has such a loving essence. Thank you for sharing this and enetering.
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YAY brother you got a gold and you deserved this very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I love this entire thing! you always amaze me with your words!!! That is why you are my brother!!!
you OMGosh so Stunning!!! 
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Love is th strongest of emotions that never let's go.If it is true love it stays with us for ever.a lovely write, Ros
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Beautifully penned!!
This is an amazing piece about reuniting love after a separation. Are these song lyrics, or did you mean for this to be a poem? It's quite good, either way.
Knight70
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Hey bro, thanks a lot!
They are song lyrics that I wrote one day.
I am glad that you like it. I appreciate it!
Jeremy0826
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Beautiful! Loved the flow of the poem, made me tear up a little! Amazing job! Kudos all around!
-Candice -
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Lezzie, thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment on this song of mine. I appreciate it and am glad that you enjoyed it! Take care and have a wonderful week ahead!
Jeremy0826
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very, very beautiful!!
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Beautiful
I love your poem. It is so..beautiful. It's a song too, I can tell. And I love the whole thing. Seriously, great job. I really hope the best for you!
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You did a beautiful job on this write my friend, one would only know your heart is gold. Thank you for sharing this wonderful write with us all...GETS
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I like the rhyme in this a lot, and I'm glad someone else can do it, other than me! This is structured very well, each stanza being only four lines. It's neat, clean, and well thought out.
Nice job. Good luck.
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Oh wow... this is like one of those songs that I would have to listen to over and over again.. just cuz it would make me cry and let it all out. You did an amazing job here... I love this.. more than most poems I have read on here. Your words filled me with some amazing memories and as always you managed to make my soul sigh. Thank you for sharing this with me hon!!
Love,
~Krys~
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I love this piece. It is so beautifully written and overflowing with love. It has a smooth flow and rhymes easily in places. I don't think I could pick a favorite part, although I do love the way you have repeated some of the lines. Nicely written and good luck in the contest.
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This is just BEAUTIFUL.I LOVED IT!!!It actually brought tears to my eyes.VERY GOOD KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!
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This was beautiful. I could just see your love, so vividly. It touched me. So many people will be able to relate to this poem, thank you so very very much for entering my contest, and good luck. Your write was amazing. Keep on Writing.
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Wow simply Amazing write
This write really toughed home. My husband is in an other country and I could feel your words. For every night my husband tells me alot of the same. It more than one year that we have been apart. Hopefully in August we will reunite. You Love Lyrics are a master piece of memories. You left me speechless. (LISA)
"I’ll always love you and I hope that you realize,
all that I feel for you is genuine and written in the skies.
You’ll always be with me wherever I am,
deep in your heart I hope that you understand.
One day we will be together again,
someday soon I will hold you once more.
And when we are together again,
I will love you forevermore."
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Esroddo, thank you very much for
taking the time to read and comment
on this one. I really appreciate it
and am glad that you enjoyed it! I
do wish you all the best and hope that
you get to see your husband again very
soon! Take care my friend and thanks
again!
Jeremy0826
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This is great. Its so heart felt and sad in a way, but so beautiful as to what love can do a person; even if only one person is loving. This flowed well and you just did a fine job on it. Good luck in the contest!
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very sweet
i love this poem!!! this is a very romantic poem...i really liked it!!! wow u really have some unexplained talent!!!
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Thanks for your entry. This is packed full of emotion and I like the way the rhyme scheme changes halfway through. However, at times your rhymes seem a little forced ("My love for you will never bend" might be better as "My love for you will never end," as it has a little more meaning). Having said that, I really enjoyed this song, especially this couplet:
I wait for the day when we reunite,
I dream of you every day and night.
Your metre is very strong throughout the majority of the poem. It slips a little towards the end, but predominantly it's very tight. Thanks again for your entry,
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Wonderfully Written
This is so sad, filled with so many raw emotions. Great imagery. I have felt this way many times before... so you took me back there my friend.. and that is a great thing. I honestly wish I was half as good as you. I am your #1 fan, you should know this. Good luck in the contest. Let me know what happens. ~~Shannon~~
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magical words of love
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Wow,
I usually don't do the paste thing,
but this hit me beautifully...
Let’s sit back together and reminisce the times,
when our love was all that we knew.
Can you remember the first time we said “I love you”?
Oh what it did to me, what it did to you.
You created what was in your heart here, and this art is truly beautiful...You have a way with sharing, expressing, and unfolding the picture that your soul holds..This all unfolded very nicely bro..
All the best within the contest!
Thanks for sharing you, peace, bro Timothy~
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Wow. Great job! I am absolutely in love with the line: all that I feel for you is genuine and written in the skies. That's just such a beautiful line!!! Great job. Best wishes to you in the contest. Thanks for sharing. All the best to you. Take care.
. Rewarded 6
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aww.. simple and sweet way to go..
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Wow
Awww this is beautiful!! So full of emotion and heart. Just gorgeous. I could totally hear this song. Beautiful flow. I'm such a romantic and this is just... wonderful.
Great job! And Good luck in the contest sweetie!
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Wow I felt so much emotion and love beheld in this words written. I can tell you have written from your heart and not just the logic of what one thinks that love is. I can relate to this poem to the absolute fullest. Its just so amazing I had to read it more than just once. You are a very beautiful poet I can tell because you leave your reader wanting more and a feeling of what you wrote. Thanx for sharing this piece. Keep penning and I hope all goes well for you.
God Bless
Plzdiefasterlove
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Liked these lyrics you have penned in this write - good flow, rhythm and rhyme and great chorus. This kind of love is never gone, always there and a part of you.
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good write, and good luck in the contest. i could feel your passion for your other, and it struck a chord in my own heart. way to reach the reader.
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Awww, how lovely. Full of love and hope. Very refreshing piece compared to others about love.
Have a wonderful day and best of luck in the contest,
FallenPoeticAngel
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quoting...
'One Day We'll Be Together Again'....
I hope you get your wish and that it be that she wants it too...
love is a beautiful thing when shared equeal by two....and not one sided....which is a shame when it happens...but thats life....
anyways I must not say to much for I sometimes get carried away when writting...
and I thank you for sharing this bit of your works/ words with us and me too....
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