The willow’s tears flow fresh
Its lonely pain cuts so deep
Green blood is what it bleeds
Screaming cries of silence
Author notes
Option #7- Silent Screams
A contest entry
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600 points, ended June 24, 2007, 28 entries
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oh wow. i love this. this sends such an environmental message too,
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Thank you
-Sarah
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This is a lovely piece. Green blood, I hadn't ever thought of that. Very original. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
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Haha, thanks- it just sorta came to me.
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a sad piece, ah the willow tree, it is inspiration to many a poet with its sad form, perhaps it weeps too at times, with joy
a good poem.
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Thank you greatly (:
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Interesting. I liked the part about the green blood. Good luck!!!
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Haha thanks.
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