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Final Nail

Fear,
Drove the final nail
Into the cross.

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Written Easter Sunday 2006

A contest entry

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  • Ravenblood
    June 17, 2007

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    Ok, i love that. Im normally not one for religious poems. but that is gooood .. really really good.
    fear will make us do many bad and horrible things, like new things, people are only scared of them because they dont know what it is....

    Good Luck in Malicai's contest.

    Claire-Anne


  • Haiku-bless-you silver member
    June 14, 2007
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    Such a powerful write with so few words, you got my attention. Well Done.

    Dennis


  • Florida Sunshine
    June 10, 2007

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    This is a great write! Religiously I think you might be right, but I haven't the bible enough to be sure! Thanks for entering my contest!


    • miles of smiles
      June 10, 2007
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      ThanksI used to go to a catholic school and am still very in touch with my christianity.

      -S

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