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Urban Comforts

Last night I counted three hundred street lights
Under each of them - a star.
Daylight by now was a fading memory,
A snickering wind waltzed between orange islands,
Northen and profound, it whispered to me
Soft words that pulled me from the unforgiving light
Into a rare, unmoving urban calmness.

It stayed with me, it held my heart through inky wonder
Through unwanted over the table gazes and
lifted my head so i could see unblinkered truth
in the corners of concrete veins flowing rigid.
Now I know all there is to the night,
The city guides me like ever present family
And I'm free to evade the dawn.

Author notes

A collaboration with my poet friend.

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  • Celtess
    June 11, 2007
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    This is our poem!
    I'd forgotten about it waw. That's made my day!