A voice so shrill
Calls out to me
KILL KILL KILL
Use this pointy blade
And pierce her skin
All motley and decayed
Rip out her hair
As in her heart
You’ve cut the deepest tear
Watch her blood smear
The pure white clothes
As her eye lets out a tear
Watch her as she dies
While hiding your crimson regret
Inside those icy lies
Please tell me what you think
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such raw emotion
fucking loved this
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WOW!
THIS IS AWESOME! So full of violence and anger. Hatred maybe?? Well done on this. Very emotional, kudos!
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Very Nice
Lmao @ your sisters comment.... thats priceless what she wrote. any ways this is one incredible dark poem and its one very incredibley penned poem at that. loved the idea behind tyhis poem and love the way you penned it. excellent job sis and keep up the good work onward I go to commenting some more on your poetry
Bro 
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Another cool poem! Gotta love ya...
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Lies and deciet are what makes us seek revenege on others. I think we feel like our minds have been desecrated in some way.
A very emotional and angry write here.
Gaylene
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We have problems. But together we can make a solution. I'll help you hide the fact you've killed this person if you help ME hide the fact I've killed someone....How about it? Good solution eh. And who says two wrongs don't make a left (or something like that).
Love ya bunni boo
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ok...
wow
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