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You Know Who You Are

I wanted to call tonight,
but i talked myself out of it.
I knew you'd listen,
but couldn't help my doubt in it.

You've done it before,
You'll never let me forget it.
Made sense of my world,
When I just couldn't get it.

But I don't owe you for that.
I never asked you to care.
So don't presume to know me,
Don't you dare.

PLease think of us,
from up on that horse,
The little people,
Just staying the course.

Please tell me what you think

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  • Uniquely-Scarred
    July 21, 2007

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    i like this Its good,
    however, this verse is not working for me its the it at the end of each sentance.

    I wanted to call tonight,
    but i talked myself out of it.
    I knew you'd listen,
    but couldn't help my doubt in it.

    this though is good nice flow

    PLease think of us,
    from up on that horse,
    The little people,
    Just staying the course.

    this is good





  • Brucie
    June 10, 2007
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    This better not be about me Nice write though Good rythm, blah blah blah...I'm so bored...

    • Boiled Candy
      June 11, 2007
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      Haha, no it's not you. I've never talked myself out of calling you or telling you if i have a problem. I wrote this a while ago about someone who's not on this site, I can't remember exactly what the issue was but I was sick of feeling like I bothered them every time I spoke to them. It's all good now, for a while at least but they'll probably do something else that ticks me off later. You know who it is don't you?