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Undercover Private Eye....Seen ?

Do you watch them?
Screen writ plays.
Though tough to see,
We each have our own show.
Playing in the background.
Barely visible by the naked eye.
Open your mind,
Shut your eyes,
And enjoy...
Images you see but never noticed,
The screen writ play,
Starting
Behind the lids of your eyes.

Have you ever just watched the back of your eyelids and thrown all those blobs and static to create images?

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  • Kiran silver member
    June 13, 2007
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    Excellent. A creative piece with a lot of depth and imagination!


  • NightRavensMuse
    June 11, 2007

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    Amazing as ever

    It is good to have you back circle...trust me. I loved this piece, I really did...was glad to see something new. I WISH I could see the images that played actoss my eyelids every night...but I don't have on my glasses so it's all blurry... lol


  • SheistheLorax
    June 11, 2007

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    It's wonderful to here your long lost words once more.

    No, but really. This was good. It is interesting, no doubt, you were right about that. But I enjoyed this. 'Tis very thought-provoking.