Lost in tranlation...
they say it's okay but really
it's burning their insides
to know you've used such a pathetic excuse
and given them back
their precious words
and asked them to change them
so you can understand them
but when they're done
it's not what they meant at all
but you're happy...
and that's all that's ever really mattered...
Please tell me what you think
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oh wow, this is fantastic! i had to read it over like five times to get it but when i did it was great. i dont think you see this as a confusing peice, because you obviously know what your talking about, but unless i am having an extrordinarily slow day, the reader doesnt and that sort of misunderstanding is really involving (i'd say intreeging, but i cant spell it) hey, welcome back by the way, what took you so long ^^
xxxx
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haha, fuck knows. I just had this massive block for ages, then last night at midnight I just eploded and wrote a load of sht. well, mostly. Literally, I just have pages and pages of words that make no sense.
well, it was quite late... ehe...
thanks for commenting! you're the best.
<3
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