Crystal balls
of glistening innocence~
the future's in our hands.
Author notes
Children.
A contest entry
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That's indeed what some would have
us to think, that they have it covered in the ball of a crystal. Good luck to you in the contest.
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Thank you for entering my contest.
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Hmm inspring and so very true...
lets not screw it up lol Best of luck in the contest and good line!
A MURDEROUS LAMENT <\33 -
What a superb image.
Metaphoric magic.
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Interesting write... I like how it moves... I like how delicate crystal is so is the innocent children ~ and they are the future.... Thanks for entering my contest!
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Captured gorgeously brosef....well done....you have a definite niche for these short profound pieces..Pen on!
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Beautifully written.
whisper
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This is beautiful. It is sweet and floats with optimism. Good luck in the contest.
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Beautifully written.
Thanks for your entry. Good luck in my contest.
Harrisham Minhas
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