For everything you've done,
For everything you are,
I hate you so much,
Go get hit by a car,
Step in front of a train,
Let it mush up your brain,
Bleed a little more,
Let your head hit the floor.
Stab a knife through your chest,
Bleed til there's nothing left.
*One more time*,
Sets your death's date and time,
I won't be as nice,
Don't roll your dice,
Your chances aren't good,
I'd kill you,
Yes I would,
Bury your body,
Leave you to die,
Next day they would say,
She committed suicide,
Go die in an alley,
It can be your grand finale,
Cry as you die,
I will feel nothing inside,
No remorse.
Author notes
S.S.K.W.
DancingOnYourGrave
option #2
hate. i don't normally get very many hate poems in my contests. well in the two i've had. so i would like to see some of these.
So this one is also a poem about a snitch... she snitched on my (non-biological) brother and put him in jail for having A PLASTIC gun stupid bitch thought it was real... not to mention because she did that 3 other of my friend that were there got arrested that night.
A contest entry
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I hate snitches too! What the hell? A plastic gun? She seems like a wimp. Very dark and angry write. Be careful with your use of commas instead of full stops.
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wow, the hate came that came from the poem flooded in me and made me feel how you feel, lol, wow, great write and thank you much for entering!
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wow i mean wow. nice. i could really feel the hate in this poem. nice write and good luck in the contest!
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Wow such evil intentions and thoughts. I like this. Tis wicked sweet. Thanks for the write. Luck be to you.
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Wow this is dark and evil and wow. so much hate for this person... note not going to make you mad.
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Wow, it would suck to have you pissed at whoever it is. lol. hopefully never me. Great poem.
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wow, lots of anger.
Nice!
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