I've betrayed my soul,
fighting time to watch
you so far away from me
Through my eyes
I watch the sun set
with my face
turned to oblivion
Karma and napalm drown me
Your shadow plays games with my mind
like distant voices in the sand
Author notes
As long as I see the world
I will see you
And as long as I see you
I will need you...
A contest entry
- 10 Lines - Picture Inspired by -LilacThOughts-.
425 points, ended June 10, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Ah this just speaks of someone in love, hope they know how much
Love, C
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Beautifully penned, thank you

~Lilac




