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Distant Voices

I've betrayed my soul,
fighting time to watch
you so far away from me
Through my eyes
I watch the sun set

with my face
turned to oblivion

Karma and napalm drown me

Your shadow plays games with my mind
like distant voices in the sand

Author notes

As long as I see the world
I will see you
And as long as I see you
I will need you...

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  • Cannonsfire
    June 10, 2007
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    Ah this just speaks of someone in love, hope they know how much Love, C


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    June 10, 2007
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    Beautifully penned, thank you

    ~Lilac