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Frozen eyes

I wait for you
as the leaves turn green and yellow.
But you do not turn up.
The chills of longingness wash over me
on loving reminiscence of us
holding hands and laughing into the night
and waking to gentle whispers.
I wait for you in the rain and snow
and time freezes for me as
my eyes shall forever wait for you now.

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  • Madhumita
    June 22, 2007

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    WOW WOW WOW!!! This is so beautifully put in!!! Loved the feel and gentle flow of this poem! Awesome write!!! Keep up and congrats for the trophy!!!


  • -LilacThOughts- gold member
    June 10, 2007
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    Oh! this is so touching, thank you

    ~Lilac


  • Number 13
    June 10, 2007
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    incredible imagery