She is everything a [Man] could want, S.H.E has
beauty, brains, money,
a good job....
Thats what >she< t.h.i.n.k.s.
so
>S>E>L>F absorbed,
Always {worry}.ing about things.. CARS.houses.
jewelry.
hair
styles.
what [o.t.h.e.r.s] think about her.
Always has n
e
w
e
s
t trends.
Laughs[haha] at last weeks f-a-d-s
Cutting E.D.G.E.
She's so V.A.I.N.
Has no <3.
Author notes
Hell, it might be DP it might not, depends on who you ask I suppose. I haven't a clue. 
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A contest entry
- Picture inspiration, pen me something amazing. by Naridill.
650 points, ended June 12, 2007, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - & sometimes the prettiness never dies♥ by xxRainbowDawnxx.
400 points, ended December 30, 2008, 32 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Oh I know so many people like this, unfortunately not all woman either
more men, really if I'm honest. Shocking.
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I have always wondered what dirty pretty was now I think I know. this is such a good write. great job. I love it.
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neat
I've always liked these kind of poems. They're so creative and eye catching. I'm thinking of trying this style. I like the poem as well. Goes with the pic nicely.
Good luck
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Awesome! I love dirty pretty that isn't over the top, and this is an excellent example. [Don't tell anyone but I love random grammar that looks good].
Excellent piece though, full of description and imagery. A definate truth behind the lines and had a nice flow.
Well done, thanks for entering and much luck.
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WOW i loved the write anddd the picture.
I love dirt pretty =]
though i'm not that good at it, at all =/
But I love this!
GOod luck in the contest =]
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