Upon the floor in chains of steel,
The promised lay,
Children bearing ages,
Younger than the dying day,
Gone astray,
Like drones of stone their bodies stunned,
Splashed in blood, naked beneath the mud,
Teased by the thorns of their adult mistress,
Clad in ebony spikes and leather,
Sworn to weather,
She speaks, and every word is heard,
The children cry in her despise,
While holding her whip,
Her gaze never lied,
But still, her mind was soaked with lust,
A parasite of life,
She fed on their demise,
From her lair of sullen despair,
The agony reached her ears,
With every muffled scream,
She gathered more strength and power,
Their tears fueled the eternal lashes,
Until their bodies bled from every cavity,
And their hearts seized to throb,
For then the night was about to begin!
The fear and pain of death,
Led her to complete satisfaction,
Her sexual urge grew with every breath,
Raping the dead like slaves,
A floor lined thick with silent girls,
The corpses smelled of sulfur,
As she undressed her body pressed,
Against their faces to solve her,
Zeritual!
The domination of her nation,
Spellbound by hallucination,
Her ritual!
The lesbian forced down again,
Defiling youth, abusing sin,
On evenings when the moon lit red,
She felt them before they were dead,
Their pleas and begging served her lust,
Gagged and bleeding, suffocating to bust,
Locks of frosted brunette hair,
Jagged, vivid, like their nightmares,
The final expressions they left her,
Forced her to laugh in splendor,
Zeritual!
The dying silence after violence,
Rang the bells of shadow's toll,
Her blackened soul,
The moonlit glow rose white to show,
The sparkling remnants of their souls,
The goddess of the night,
Echoed her stolen blight,
And shunned away the sight,
Of peace before the fight,
That left her undone!
Until fate crept along the strings of darkness,
The pool of youth rotted at her feet,
And with every fresh victim thrown into the mess,
Her happiness enchanted her aura,
"Girlies, don't cry,
I'm here to play,
Until and after you die,
You'll suffer my way,"
Thrust deep the goddess of the night!
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I love you.
Wow. That person gave you an ear full. Well.
I still want to masturbate to it. Only. Not really. And I still love it. And you.
You're amazing.

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Mmm, thoroughly creepy, well worded and of good length. (Can't stand those short little poems)
Though, I have to say the rhyme got to me a few times, though at other instances I found myself enjoying it- so I can't really ask you to get rid it of it, now can I?
I thought that your last stanza didn't really do the poem justice. It was too simple, and I hate the use of the word "Girlie."
Ah, sixth stanza from the bottom there was a spelling error (the main one I noticed, though it seems there was another). Just change the first "o" in "soffocation" to a "u" making it "suffocation."
I really enjoyed this stanza:
"The fear and pain of death,
Led her to complete satisfaction,
Her sexual urge grew with every breath,
Raping the dead like slaves"
Particularly the last of those lines. It was quite original.
One more complaint I'd like to make is that your punctuation could use some work. Seems that there were Too Many commas.
- Allura



