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Some Days

Some days I sing,
Some days I cry;
while other days
I just don't feel at all

Welcome to my life!

Some days are, well...
just better than others.
I can smile,
I can laugh.

Then there are the bad ones...
I cry,
and inside,
a piece of my heart dies.
I can't take the pain,
it hurts so bad.

I just can't take those days.
They kill me.

Author notes

So maybe this isn't very poetic...it is what I feel though. This is my life fighting my battle. Some days I am fine, others I am depressed.

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  • ellipsist
    July 10, 2007

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    I'd disagree... sometimes, in

    the way we arrange the simplest of thoughts, we manage to combine them in a rather poetic way... I'd say you've done that here


  • Akimbo
    June 21, 2007
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    I wish I had an answer but I don't; I can only send you warm thoughts and...

    Kj

  • keatsnwaldo
    June 16, 2007
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    up and down... thats how these days pass


  • Cerulean Sunrise gold member
    June 10, 2007

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    I like this write. It just tells it how it is. Well expressed. Glad to see your words again.

    Smiles,
    Mark


  • Roaddog Wolf
    June 10, 2007

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    well it's full of heart

    alot of heart and I hope you feel many more good days than bad. This is a good penning of emotions and reality to you thanks for sharing


  • Amber Lee
    June 10, 2007
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    I know just how you feel!Good write.

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