Dig into my soul, please set me free
bring to life, the emotions in me.
Let me shout from within
to a world, full of sin.
Showing them all, what this girl can be.
Please tell me what you think
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I like it...
when words make me smile...
what's that worth?
Thanks,
Kj
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I really really like this piece of poetry. I really don't consider it a limerick however, and I will not let that be held against you in judging because it is under 10 lines.
A Limerick is a rhymed humorous or nonsense poem, and of course this is not.
Thank you for entering the contest.
Sam
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well penned
written from your usual deep felt emotions good write -
nice
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WOW!Great write!Very powerful.
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