Don't touch me
Stay away
Your hands are like acid
longing to seep through me
Not a word
That toxic fog you call breath
Its inching twards me
Your poisn to my brain
you take my thoughts away
Stay away
I can not conncentrate when your around
Everything around points to you
Look at what you put me through
Go away, I wont cry
I want love to pass me by.
Wheres that smell, it isn't here
I've grown acustom to you being here
I miss your smile, that toxic breath
Wheres that acid in my chest
You left me like the others did
Me alone and cold agian
I did no wrong don't blame me
you should love for what you see
learn to wait but do as told
I absolutely love it when your bold
Don't hate me for who I am
change yourself to fit my plan
A contest entry
- Conflict With Your Inner Self by hand-in-hand.
450 points, ended May 21, 2008, 38 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - It's All About the Rhyme by BlackSwan.
600 points, ended July 27, 2008, 30 entries
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Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I like it
I like how much emotion and intensity is in there. But some lines and words don't fit it doesn't seem to flow in some parts. Also in the firts stanza 8th line Poison is not spelled out.Good job. -
strong...touch of intensity. good job...
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OUCH
Don't want to get on your bad side!!Good story though.
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wow
this has alot of emotion in it.. I think you are very talented... I dont think you should change anything...
I guess you could call it wonderful! 
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