The next one
To criticize
Gets a bullet
Between his eyes
What right do you have
TO think your better than me
Or anyone else here
Sick of your hypocrisy
You think you're perfect
But I'm tired of your lies
Manipulative
Everyday there's a different diguise
Get down on your knees
Do you believe in God?
Apologize to me-You claim to be
Christian, but you're just a fraud
Lies and deciet aren't very christian
You're two faced and conceited
I thought your job was
To have all evils defeated...
I'm someone
You despise-
A different belief
You criticize
But who's
Holding the gun?
One more word
And you're done...
Again-Do you believe in God?
And you start to criticize
What I'm doing
Pull the trigger-bullet between your eyes
I'll leave it up to Him
To sort out all your lies
And when he sends you to Hell
Will him you then criticize?
Repeat the directions-
All of you take a knee
No more hypocrisy-
Answer the question and Apologize for the way I've been treated
But if you want
A bullet between the eyes
Just copy your friend-
Criticize...
Author notes
Uh.. Ionno where this came from.. Except that I've had alot of "christian/religious" people talking shit and everything on me.. Just because I dont necessarily believe what they do... Feel like lining them all up and shooting every single one that opens their mouth... But I don't think I will.. I'm not quite that crazy yet... So yeah this poem is like..an execution I think...Hmm..kinda reminds me of Columbine...o.o
Please tell me what you think
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Fuck yeah!!! You and me both, sister. Let's kill those fucking twats!!! Now, REAL Christians I have no problems with unless they DO push shit down my throat. If they keep their thoughts and "prayers" to themselves then I'm all good with it. But otherwise... *cocks rifle*
Excellent poem, m'dear!!
I could definately feel the anger and frustrations with these religious "martyrs" of sorts (when they're around you, anyway! 
). Kudos!
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wow this is a great poem to be honest i feel the same way alot of the time and i am glad u took ur time to capture it in this poem so very well keep writing
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I like this poem the best,
'Cause honestly
Where me & my family just happened to move to,
Was "all 'bout bein' christian"
Well,
I had my fill within the 1st week,
Anyone who's willin' to yell,
"Christian's rock"
Their fuckin' crazy,
I had this friend,
Becca May,
Yeah, She's christian,
Her friends are christian,
Let's go to a christian church,
Well,
Stupid ass whore,
Got knocked up,
& pregnant,
to a pot head,
What the fuck is that...
Woooo,
Now I need to breathe,
Anyway's
Wait,
Shit...
She's in Kentucky,
& she's 16
Is that you???
By any Chance,
Are you
Rebecca May?
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Lol. No...i'm not her.. definitely... You wanna know the sick twist to all this shit?... My dad's a preacher!!..HA!...dyfunctional family I tell you that.. My grandfather and father are preachers.. the whole rest of my family are devout christians.. and I'm fucking gothic agnostic and such.. it's fucked.. seriously.. Thx for ur comment neway!
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