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Sparrow

spake--
"Feral
and fae, girl,
You will break free."
But I hold tight-- drawn
and coiled at solar
(plexus), Itching deep at heart
to hear: ("free now, loved and lorn, fly!")
But the air sits, hot and still-- Trapped

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  • Samplette gold member
    June 11, 2007

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    A very thought provoking piece of poetry. Well written. Than you very much for entering the contest.
    Sam