when I die look down but dont cry.When I pass out shake but dont shout.When you see my wrist bleeding,remember it was love I was needing.When my heart stops it's beat,think of the angel I didn't meet.When you pull the knife out of my chest,remember the person I loved the best.Dont try to stem the bleeding flow of my guts,nothing you have can heal my cuts.When my body is abandoned and cold remember whom I gave my heart to hold.When I'm dead dont look for someone new,my last words were I love you.
A contest entry
- "I'm sad" POETRY :( by thelovesongwriter.
345 points, ended June 20, 2007, 96 entries
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i'm speechless...this is very powerful && sad. good luck.
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extremely powerful i love it!
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I really like this one too. It's a great write.
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Yep!!! I get that just fine!
I won't squish out all your guts!
I'll cover you with butter nuts!
And then whipped cream I will apply
and smooth it out before you die!
I'll dress you in a robe of red
and prop you up onto your bed!
And then I'll fix your hair so cool
You'll pop alive and run to school!
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