You look at me
What do you see?
An angel, right?
But you have no clue!
Every night I lie awake
Consumed by something I cannot control
I plot my revenge
I strengthen my anger
I plan my escape
I write out your death
Every day I hide it away
A power of something I cannot control
Soaked up in vanity
You smile my way
Think you've got me under your spell
But it is I that have you
Every moment I use it well
An advantage of something I cannot control
The knife in my pocket
The fangs in my mouth
The blood on your floor
The pain in your back
Every tear drop means more
Giving my something I cannot control
The sick twisted thoughts
My grimly smile
The cuts on your wrist
Matching the scars on mine
Every strike, I grow stronger
A rage of something I cannot control
Look at me now!
What do you see?
An angel, all right!
The Angel of Death!
Every second you are dying
Every second I am growing
Consumed by this darkness I will not control!
Author notes
This is definitly different than what I normally write! But definitly something I wish I could do to someone that hurt me!
Hope it's what you're looking for!
A contest entry
- Deeper into the Darkness by Dark Soul Reaper.
300 points, ended June 20, 2007, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Dark and different for me! Whadaya think???
Comments
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DAMN yeah... (slowly walks backwards and turns around and runs) just kidding. I thought that this was awesome. I Love dark poetry. You should wirte it more often.
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*laughs* I agree sis, people definitely do NOT want to be hurting you! Although if someone hurt me or someone close to my heart, increase the violence in this poem by about ten and you'd have how pissed I'd be lol! I love everything you write, whether it be out of ordinary or not. Love it babe, keep 'em coming!
Love you,
Hannah
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Ok... note to self... DON'T and i repeat DON'T hurt you. Anyway. Great write and it's just what i'm looking for. The whole thing just flowed. I like it all. Good Luck to you.
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