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Divine Time

It's time.
You've made the climb.
Let's commit the crime.
We're in our prime.
This poem will rhyme
as things get grime,
and our bodies sublime.

This feels so fine.
You're all mine.
Our bodies intertwine.
You're so divine
On your lips, I dine.
You will be my life line.
I hope you always shine.

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  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    June 12, 2007

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    wow baby. you gave it to me as I love. I love this write and you gave the so call ryhmers a challenge with this so when do I get my lessons? naw just playing but I like this I love this write see I can't even stop saying it.


  • Beating gold member
    June 10, 2007

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    wow. serious rhyming. i like it though, it's sweet and poetic, and got me thinking