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Careful Cracks

Careful cracks creeping up on creation
creatively calling and cha chaing
to the cartilage of some childhood

hey chick
cherry hearted civilian
you chase my cloud
cheap the cheater
        and trick the cranberries
your cries like chives
                    closing in
and clearing the coincidences
caught in the cleavage and closet combinations
of a crimson cutting crazy world

crap man
the crabs came and went
and the coast never caught the same crave

Author notes

i was reading the examples and well i guess i decided to only use words that didnt start with "c" when i absolutley possitivly had to. but on the other hand this is still very much how my poetry is

cha chaing is meant to be like the dance the cha cha... if know one got that.

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  • surreal realist
    November 17, 2007
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    Quite cool, with a little bit of humor.


  • BlackRabbit9x
    June 11, 2007

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    I love your approach to the challenge and the creativity, continuous in its characterizations, of how you combine your flow and your ability to know how to completely cha cha your way through this course of a challenge. Good luck in the contest!