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The Gardener

Drenches in poisoned bonds of ivy,
Far behind her apple eyes
Rests the Gardener's redemption
Tangled in historic lies

The Adam counterpart, She whispers
Resurrected from the grave
Gardener's tongue sings with the willows
"Deny the Father, free the Slave"

Searching soil's revalation
Warning all those who believe
Never gifted love nor beauty
Bound, She waits, the restless Eve


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  • Eternally Hellcat
    June 10, 2007

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    Hrm

    I like it.....this is another one of those works of yours that really is a few inches above my head, so I'm gonna have to jump to get it, but I like it.