Just chilling,
Having a coffee
On a pavement cafe.
Then a blonde girl,
Out of this world,
Walked by.
Into the cafe she went,
Returned with a latte,
Sat at the table next to mine.
"Excuse me", I say,
"Have we met before?"
She looked at me funny.
She got up and walked away,
She didn't stay.
Have I met you before?
Just chilling,
Having a coffee,
On a pavement cafe.
Then a blonde girl,
Out of this world,
Walked by.
Into the cafe she went,
Returned with a latte,
Sat at the table next to mine.
"Excuse me", I say,
"Have we met before?"
She looked at me funny.
She got up and walked away,
She didn't stay.
Have you read that before?
A contest entry
- Quickie - Deja Vu by Ryno.
360 points, ended June 9, 2007, 15 entries
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Comments
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Very cool poem!
I am admiring this poem so much and whisking it away to Poetry Planet where it will thrill folks who visit the blog to get their daily dose of wonderful poetry!
Thank you very much for sharing your fine talent. 
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wow- this is a gold winner for sure- this is very creativve- I really enjoyed this.
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lol how original really loved the headspin this gave me, cool job, gave me a good laugh. thanks for your entry.
Ryan -
This gave me quite a chuckle. Definitely deja vu, or perhaps memory problems in the case of the narrator. It's actually a double deja vu, since the woman and the poem itself both seem familiar. Well written.
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