How could a dream ever take place of my life?
I open my eyes
And see an angel lay with me
Cuddled up
A gentle smile
On that beautiful face
Ahh that sound
The gentle sound of her breathing
The steady thud of her heart
She has stolen my heart
The sun slowly rises and bathes our body in gentle heat
In this moment I whisper in to your ear
I love you we are not two people
But one person brought together by love incarnate
Author notes
I love you Baby
A contest entry
- The Love For A Girl by Ignis Corpus.
385 points, ended June 10, 2007, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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WOW
This is really good, I love how u show ur love 4 ur girl through poetry. I'm speaking 4 myself when I say it puts a smile on my face, and a warm tingling feeling in my heart. I hope that one day I'll have a similar love like urs. This really is a BEAUTIFUL write!
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you know this is good, i like this poem , you did a great job, keep it flowing and good luck in the contest
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Ahh that sound
The gentle sound of her breathing
The steady thud of her heart
She has stolen my heart
The sun slowly rises and bathes our body in gentle heat
In this moment I whisper in to your ear
I love you we are not two people
But one person brought together by love incarnate those lines are beautiful good luck in the contest
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