Hammerfists erase punctuation marks in favor of
acerbicrunons,
the static of bad reception adding a dulcet undertone to
to the screeching wheels of your getaway car.
Fingertips trace the tracks you left behind,
dripping hopeless, dripping neglect
on sun scorched pavement, so
this roadside will be witness to this scene.
You get everything, and once again
I am left with a mouthful of dust,
spouting abstract, nonsensical phrases from a pen
that bleeds far more than this heart
is capable of, once more trading in
conventions in favor of
acerbicrunons
Please tell me what you think
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My favorite lines are "once again
I am left with a mouthful of dust,
spouting abstract".
I also love "Hammerfists erase punctuation marks in favor of
acerbicrunons,
the static of bad reception adding a dulcet undertone to
to the screeching wheels of your getaway car".
Nice write sweetie!
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thank ya muchly for the comment!!
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