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Ant in my Crack

Uncomfortable
A very itchy feeling
Ant in my behind

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usually I don't like haikus, but I didn't want this to be too, er, descriptive. And this really happened last week...

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  • WarmHeartedGeisha
    July 25, 2007
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    hahaha this is good


  • aeolia
    July 15, 2007

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    ...there was a furry spider in my knickers last week. Luckily, I didn't have them on, so I can't even imagine what having an ant in the crack feels like. O.o

    Cute haiku!


  • Melodies
    June 10, 2007

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    An ant THERE???

    Well, that's what happens if you lie about on the grass too long because if you are a poet, and you lie on the grass, well... grass rhymes with something, you know... A very funny haiku that I adore!


  • jacksonnyc
    June 9, 2007
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    put a smile on my face

    I had a bug on me this week... thank god it wasn't around my behind.


  • NightWish Raven88
    June 9, 2007

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    OMG I so understand what you mean. Its the worest when it happens. I work outside alot in the summer and get insects and other creepy crwlers in my undies. But and ant in the behind. I loved the haiku very original.

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